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#21 Arcanixium

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Posted 14 March 2012 - 08:24 PM

47. Quest : Defeat Lizario

Correction : Just like other Adventurer's Board quests, there is a missing text before the name of client.

Correction : 'Clear Lizario (Not Luba!), lizard man with white tail at Abyss in...' (Notice the change of capital letter and small letter as well)

48. Quest : Endless FIght

Correction : '...investigate about[Spacebar]Lizard Man Trooper Ruff?'

Correction : '...go to[Spacebar]Core of Forsaken Islet[Spacebar]to investigate...' (Name of place should be consistent!)

49. Quest : Faltering Love

Correction : '...who gave everything to a[Spacebar]noble.' (Wonder why there are a lot of errors with spacebar?)

Correction : 'When the noble girl[Spacebar]passed there...' (Again with the spacebar... whewboy)

50. Quest : I want to go to heaven

Correction : Explained in the picture. Script error here.



#22 Arcanixium

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Posted 14 March 2012 - 09:28 PM

51. Purified Monster Crystal

Correction : This is gibberish. I'll just write how it should be :

[Crafting]

Purified Monster's Crystal

Used to make Lv. 40 Rare equipment items.

[Update on 2/4/12]

52. Quest : Get All Mandras

Correction : 'But[Spacebar]Sword Master can you see...'

Correction : 'My kids are[Spacebar]safe at[Spacebar]Forsaken Islet Core.' (Not Middle of Island!)

Correction : 'I am King Mandra[Spacebar]of the large...'

Correction : '...Our Mom[Spacebar]is held hostage?'

Correction : 'You didn't see it?' (Notice the use of capital letter!)



#23 Arcanixium

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Posted 02 April 2012 - 12:02 PM

53. Quest : Spread of Abyss

Correction : '...my research about Abyss[Spacebar]could not...'

Correction :

1. 'Maybe you know?' (Notice the use of capital letter!)

2. 'In the entrance of Calderock the prophet stayed for a while.' (The sentence makes more sense this way)

3. '...getting protected from the Saint Haven[Spacebar]nowadays.'

Correction : 'The prophet is called...' (Notice the use of capital letter!)

Correction : '...because of the[Spacebar]prophet for sure.'

Correction : '...about the continent's future[Spacebar]Altea.' (Not Altaea!)



#24 Arcanixium

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Posted 02 April 2012 - 12:14 PM

54. Quest : You are Weaker Than Me

Correction : '...So you are hopeless too, if you are...' (There seems to be another missing text here as well!)

Correction :

1. '...who gave up, clear Road to Death City at...' (Small letter instead of capital letter!)

2. (Quest Title) : [Mission] You are weaker than me[Spacebar]II

Correction : Same as above, '[Mission] You are weaker than me[Spacebar]II'



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Posted 06 April 2012 - 09:37 AM

55. [Lv.33] Tasty babyfood

Nameless Tyrant Tomb

Mandora's favour. Let's find Mandra babyfood at Nameless Tyrant Tomb.

Correction:

1. Quest title: Tasty baby[spacebar]food

2. Quest Location: It should be Spirit Grave Tomb and not Nameless Tyrant Tomb

3. Mandora's favour. Let's find Mandra baby[spacebar]food at Spirit Grave Tomb.



#26 Arcanixium

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Posted 25 April 2012 - 03:06 AM

xSushi, on 2012-04-06 09:37:41, said:

55. [Lv.33] Tasty babyfood

Nameless Tyrant Tomb

Mandora's favour. Let's find Mandra babyfood at Nameless Tyrant Tomb.

Correction:

1. Quest title: Tasty baby[spacebar]food

2. Quest Location: It should be Spirit Grave Tomb and not Nameless Tyrant Tomb

3. Mandora's favour. Let's find Mandra baby[spacebar]food at Spirit Grave Tomb.

Thank you for the addition. I'll come back to this threads as soon as I finish other works.



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Posted 26 April 2012 - 01:53 PM

 

Correction:

... but don't annoy ME and...

 

P.S: academic class have quite a few typos etc, though i didn't take all but pls correct it, i'll try to get the errors :)



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Posted 26 April 2012 - 02:06 PM

Correction:

...he'll BE kidnapped...



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Posted 26 April 2012 - 03:24 PM

56. Quest : Endless Fight (New Addition)

Correction :

'At[Spacebar]Core of Forsaken Islet, find Lizardman General Ruff[Spacebar]and try to...'

'Hermalte Port (Deserted Islet) [Right Arrow] Core of Forsaken Islet' (Please be consistent with name of place!)

57. Quest : Faltering Love (New Addition)

Correction : 'Anyway, take this.' (There seems to be a script error here...)

Correction : 'If[Spacebar]Malcolm's[Spacebar]sanity returns...' (Another spacebar problem...)

58. Quest : Prophet That Does Not Wake Up (New Addition)

Correction : '...the holy water is unable...'

59. Quest : Rash Love

Correction : 'my dad[Spacebar]will be so...'

Correction : '...he is just a stupid[Spacebar]royal guard...'



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Posted 26 April 2012 - 03:32 PM

60. Quest : Resurrection of Serpent (Note : There are a lot of typos in this quest!)

Correction : Serpentra[Spacebar]attacked a vessel.

Correction : 'Now, we can't get help from[Spacebar]dragons...'

Correction :

'...together to defeat[Spacebar]Serpentra.'

'Is there anyone who knows about Serpentra?'

Correction : '...to Master Archer Ithilien (Not Adelynn! Adelynn is Master Archer in Calderock Village!)[Spacebar] to ask about...'

Correction :

The NPC name should be Master Archer Ithilien (See previous correction!).

'Serpentra[Spacebar]attacked a vessel so the damage...'



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Posted 26 April 2012 - 03:41 PM

(Resurrection of Serpent - Continue)

Correction :

NPC name should be Master Archer Ithilien!

'Serpentra[Spacebar]was a really...'

'...they suppressed Serpentra[Spacebar]first.'

Correction :

NPC name should be Master Archer Ithilien!

'...tried to defeat[Serpentra]together...'

'...it was[Spacebar]Geraint's sword.'

Correction :

NPC name should be Master Archer Ithilien!

'Sometimes[Spacebar]Geraint's sword[Spacebar]showed us...'

Correction :

NPC name should be Master Archer Ithilien!

'Velskud[Spacebar]did...?'

'(Ithilien seems surprised)'

'...Velskud[Spacebar]is the one who knows...'

Correction :

'Did Ithilien[Spacebar]tell you something...'

'(Tell him what Ithilien said)'

Correction : 'Geraint's sword[Spacebar]is what we need...?'



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Posted 26 April 2012 - 03:52 PM

(Resurrection of Serpent - Continue)

Correction : 'Dark Knight[Spacebar]stole the sword...'

Correction '...don't attack the Dark Knight[Spacebar]alone...'

Correction : '...to the Dark Overlord Tower[Spacebar]to...'

(Note : I haven't really finished this quest and I expect there are still more typos with especially spacebar crazy. I will appreaciate a help from anyone who have completed this quest and record all typos there are in this quest.)

61. Quest : Strange Request

Correction : 'center of Desolate Islet' should be 'Core of Forsaken Islet/Forsaken Islet Core'!

Correction : 'center of Desolate Islet' should be 'Core of Forsaken Islet/Forsaken Islet Core'!

62. Quest : Voluntary Action of Missy Lena

Correction : 'At Spirit Grave Tomb[Spacebar]I hired...'

Correction : '...Spirit Grave Tomb[Spacebar]until the end...'



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Posted 26 April 2012 - 03:54 PM

brangien, on 2012-04-26 13:53:36, said:

 

Correction:

... but don't annoy ME and...

 

P.S: academic class have quite a few typos etc, though i didn't take all but pls correct it, i'll try to get the errors :)

I found that Alchemist's skill description in skill tree is pretty messed up, although I'm not really sure for Engineer. Already send a message to CC, no reply so far both for this and also for all other translation errors.



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Posted 26 April 2012 - 04:32 PM

63. Quest : Babies Grow and Grow

Correction : '...Mandra baby[Spacebar]food[Spacebar]to one of...'

Correction :

'...hidden in Core of Forsaken Islet.'

'...give Mandra baby[Spacebar]food to them.'

Correction : 'Dishonest merchant[Spacebar]may find me right now.'

Correction : '...that the dishonest merchant[Spacebar]has found...'

64. Quest : Bizzare Aftermath

Correction :

'...by our young King's moral.' (Note the use of small letter!)

'Isn't that a wonderful thing?' (Note the use of question mark!)

65. Quest : Endless Fight (New Addition)

Correction : '...that Lizardman Trooper Ruff[Spacebar]was one of monsters of Black Mountain or was...' (Note the punctuation and spacebar!)

Correction :

'...didn't Geraint[Spacebar]defeated Black Dragon?'

'He was defeated but...I can't say he's dead.'

Correction :

'...then Black Dragon[Spacebar]hides somewhere...'

'Huu...the war with[Spacebar]Black Dragon[Spacebar]is not done yet.' (Note the use of small letter!)

Correction : '...Bishop and Duke will disagree...' (Note the use of capital letter for titles!)



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Posted 27 April 2012 - 01:24 PM

 

[/quote]

I found that Alchemist's skill description in skill tree is pretty messed up, although I'm not really sure for Engineer. Already send a message to CC, no reply so far both for this and also for all other translation errors.

[/quote]

>.<

i can't help with engineer since i'm playing alchemist too D:

am I supposed to submit to CC? or by just putting these up,  will these be corrected? there are lots of spacing mistakes D:

not only the skills, NPC's names are also weird, Cleric Edan is sometimes written as Cleric Ethan

and is it Warrior Xian or Cyan?



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Posted 27 April 2012 - 06:28 PM

Arcanixium, on 2012-02-12 14:37:56, said:

Referring to http://forum.cherrycredits.com/forum/topics/view/let-the-typos-flow, I would like to make the translation error report section alive again.

Most likely this thread will become my own collection of translation error report, but everyone is welcome to submit their findings here.

The reason I make this thread is because I feel that our community and even CC are not active enough to fix translation errors. Some errors remain for a long time without much attention and effort to change it.

I understand this is somewhat less important than other major issues like game system/mechanism, abuse report, bug report, and so on. However, I feel that a good translation will make the game much neater. It is rather disturbing when you are doing a quest just to find some gibberish description and unclear explanation on what you are supposed to do, especially to those few players who actually care and enjoy the storyline and side stories of the game.

Thank you for your attention and every kind of support on this will be appreciated.

totally agree with u! :D
just find it disturbing with so many of those errors D:



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Posted 02 May 2012 - 02:54 AM

I almost love the game. The battles are really fun.

...but the bad English almost EVERYWHERE in the game is really turning me off this game. There are far, far too many errors for me to report here because they are very basic errors. One example: 'Wise of the Owl' does not make sense. It should be 'Wisdom of the Owl'. All this is actually very basic English which everyone learns by the end of Primary School / Grade School.

I strongly recommend temporarily hiring someone to proofread ALL the English in the game. Or just hire writers who can speak better English to do all the text. It will definitely vastly improve the game experience and make this a top mmo.

I will also hesitate less to buy from the Cash Shop if it didn't have SO MANY simple mistakes.



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Posted 02 May 2012 - 06:18 PM

You can always help by sending a ticket to CC Messenger. They will most likely pay attention if there are some players complaining about the matters.

And one more thing, I need help to check whether any changes has been made or not (in case you have the relevant quest on-going) as most of the quest I have submitted here have been finished and it is impossible for me to retake them and check for any changes made.



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Posted 02 May 2012 - 07:01 PM

IcyZai, on 2012-05-02 02:54:35, said:

I almost love the game. The battles are really fun.

...but the bad English almost EVERYWHERE in the game is really turning me off this game. There are far, far too many errors for me to report here because they are very basic errors. One example: 'Wise of the Owl' does not make sense. It should be 'Wisdom of the Owl'. All this is actually very basic English which everyone learns by the end of Primary School / Grade School.

I strongly recommend temporarily hiring someone to proofread ALL the English in the game. Or just hire writers who can speak better English to do all the text. It will definitely vastly improve the game experience and make this a top mmo.

I will also hesitate less to buy from the Cash Shop if it didn't have SO MANY simple mistakes.

No, compared with other MMORPG, I would say they have done quite a good job. However, it needs to be improved and we can all support them by pointing out whatever misatakes we have found.



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Posted 04 May 2012 - 01:06 AM

IcyZai, on 2012-05-02 02:54:35, said:

I almost love the game. The battles are really fun.

...but the bad English almost EVERYWHERE in the game is really turning me off this game. There are far, far too many errors for me to report here because they are very basic errors. One example: 'Wise of the Owl' does not make sense. It should be 'Wisdom of the Owl'. All this is actually very basic English which everyone learns by the end of Primary School / Grade School.

I strongly recommend temporarily hiring someone to proofread ALL the English in the game. Or just hire writers who can speak better English to do all the text. It will definitely vastly improve the game experience and make this a top mmo.

I will also hesitate less to buy from the Cash Shop if it didn't have SO MANY simple mistakes.

LOL i agree~ they should hire someone to at least to do some corrections

 

Arcanixium, on 2012-05-02 18:18:35, said:

You can always help by sending a ticket to CC Messenger. They will most likely pay attention if there are some players complaining about the matters.

And one more thing, I need help to check whether any changes has been made or not (in case you have the relevant quest on-going) as most of the quest I have submitted here have been finished and it is impossible for me to retake them and check for any changes made.

how to check? most dialogues can only be seen once, especially those in e quests, unless we replay it -.-lll

 

and btw, are thr any methods to upload those photos directly from our files? it's so troublesome to have to upload it somewhr else 1st

i found some of e mistakes but gah! i hate to upload those stuff and copy e URL so troublesome :p